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Sep. 26th, 2007 05:06 pm jolis yeux d'or (fanfiction)

 

“He’s a particular one isn’t he.”

“What do you mean?”

“His eyes… look at his eyes. Its particular isn’t it, that gold color he’s got, and all those little speckles in ‘em. It’s particular that is. Haven’t seen eyes like ‘em in years. Almost molten don’t you think?”

“I never really-“

“And he’s got that sense about him too. You can see that. Look! Stare right into his eyes. You see?”

“I’m not sure what you-“

“Jus’ look at him, that way about him. You’ know, in his eyes, like he’s already in charge. Best you give him a strong name to fit that look.”

&

“You’re wrong.”

“Your weak.”

“You’re wrong about that too.”

“Your face looks awful.”

“Shut up Azula.”

“Shame. Mom always said you had nice eyes, I don’t think anyone will complement you on them now though.

&

“I could fix it you know.”

“I know.”

“I’m a healer.”

“You told me that already.”

“So just let me-“

“No.”

“It’s not like you have anything to lose.”

“I said no.”

“so you’d rather live your life with a great big blemish obscuring you left eye all because you wouldn’t let a humble and really quite talented-“

“Talented?”

“Yes.”

“Humph.”

“Come here. Now. No, don’t back away from me. Just, ugh!-“

“Get off me!”

“Be quiet and hold still…”

&

“I’d never noticed before.”

“What?”

“Have you ever been close enough to see the Fire Lord’s eyes?”

“Well, I’ve seen him across the halls sometimes when I clean west wing, and he’s on all those posters-“

“No, those posters don’t do him any justice.”

“What are going on about?”

“The Fire Lord. His eyes… they’re quite… Pretty.”


This was an experimental piece. sometimes I find myself writing random dialogs so i wanted to see if i could actualy put ONLY dialog together and fit into an understandable story line. please tell me what you think. good or bad.

About the season premire, yeah, how freakishly awesome was it. Zuko's gone back to his bad assery which is sooooooo much better then the zuko on prozac. The maiko even pleased me (yes thats right, I'm a zutarian who enjoyed maiko. sue me) The only thing that messed me up a bit was the wonky editing. seriously, it switched around WAY to fast. and best of all in my T.V. Production class today i found out that my teacher is a mad Avatar fan. How awesome is that?

And sorry for not updating anything in so long. I've been busy with school. I'll update TLWTTF soon.

-AKI

Current Mood: accomplished

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